Showing posts with label manuscript critiques. Show all posts
Showing posts with label manuscript critiques. Show all posts

Tuesday, December 10, 2019

Bring Your Career Into Sharper Focus With Wik2020: CRITIQUE VS. CONSULTATION

For wik2020, SCBWI Southern Breeze looked at what we could do to bring your career into sharper focus and so we’ve planned amazing intensives, an exciting conference schedule, and so much more!

Like our awesome add-on items that you will need to choose when you register. That’s why we asked our Co-ARA, Lisa Lowe Stauffer, to provide added information, advice, and a few tips from members about two of our popular add-ons: the face-to-face and the manuscript critique. You’ll be one step ahead if you read this before you register!



 Manuscript Critique vs. Agent Consultation 

How do you choose what’s right for you?

In a nutshell . . .

• Choose the manuscript critique if you want feedback from a professional about one manuscript.
• Choose the agent consultation to talk about the business side of kid lit: individualized advice on topics such as prioritizing your works-in-progress, improving your query letters, marketing, rejection analysis, honing your Internet presence, career advice, or any other topic an agent can knowledgeably discuss.

How Each Works 

For a face-to-face (formal) manuscript critique: 

You’ll be matched to a suitable pro—either an agent, editor, or (occasionally) an author.
Your time slot will be assigned and you’ll receive this information at the conference check-in.
You’ll be required to send in no more than 10 pages (including a synopsis, if desired). The deadline for sending those pages is Feb. 10, 2020, so you have time to work on your manuscript.
You’ll have 15 minutes to talk about your manuscript with your critiquer.
Look at this as an opportunity for a fun, honest discussion about your manuscript.

For the one-on-one agent consultation:

You’ll choose which agent you prefer.
You’ll choose which time slot works best for you.
You’ll be allowed—but not required—to send up to 5 pages of information ahead of time (February 10, 2020 deadline). The agent will not provide a formal critique of submitted material but may briefly discuss (if that’s what you prefer).
You’ll have 20 minutes to chat about whatever you want.


The Inside Scoop from Previous Participants

 “Which one you choose depends on what you’re looking for,” says Janice Hardy. “If you’re looking for an agent, a one-on-one is good because you get to pitch and interact with the agent. Especially if it’s an agent you’re interested in. If you’re still working on the manuscript, the critique is better. Not every agent who agrees to do a critique is looking for new clients, so you can’t count on them saying, ‘Wow this is amazing, send it to me.’ It happens, but that’s not the point of a manuscript critique.”

Janice also recommends in either situation being prepared to talk about your story. “You may get questions about the characters, plot, and conflict. Especially the conflict. You may need to show you have conflict and that it’s book-worthy.”

Debbie D’Aurelio shared this about an agent consultation that really helped her. “At the time, I had interest in my manuscript from two agents and we talked about the benefits of both agencies. I also brought a short pitch and a query letter to review and she was very honest and helpful. My advice to others is not to use the time thinking you might be represented by that particular agent. It’s a great opportunity to ask general questions about the best way to get an agent and get published, etc.”

Joan Broerman says that generally, a critique is about craft and an agent consultation is more about business. “While a manuscript may be the focus of a critique, how to market that manuscript is usually best served by a one-on-one agent consultation. Either can result in moving a manuscript closer to publication.”


Thanks, Lisa! Our members had even more helpful tips about preparing for a critique or a consultation so by February 10th, we’ll share their advice before you need to send any materials. For now, consider what’s best for you and your goals, and then register early and save with the early bird discount!

             REGISTER FOR WIK2020 HERE! EARLY BIRD OPENS ON DECEMBER 15TH. 
           
                                         
Ever since her palm-reading grandmother said she would write a book, Lisa Lowe Stauffer has been working to learn the craft. Unfortunately her palm didn’t mention how long it would take, or that SCBWI would be the key to success. She had to find out those on her own! Her debut book TWO BY TWO (Zonderkidz 2018) is available wherever books are sold.







Art Image by wik2020 brochure illustrator David SanAngelo. 

Tuesday, February 5, 2019

Spring To Success With SpringMingle'19 and MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUES!


Who doesn’t love a critique?

Palms sweating and stomach fluttering with butterflies as you sit down in front of the esteemed editor or agent about to pass judgment on you. Er, I mean your manuscript.

But seriously, a critique from a publishing professional can do so much more for you than feed an adrenaline habit. My first critique taught me to let my character tell her own story. My worst critique left me frustrated and angry…and ready to write the story that was in my heart instead of something I thought people would want to read. At my next critique, the editor wanted to read more of that story. And, yes, I met my agent at a critique.

SpringMingle'19 registration is open, with critique opportunities still available, but manuscripts have to be submitted by February 8. Don’t miss your chance for personalized attention from a publishing professional. Your work will grow, and chances are, you’ll discover that those august sages are nice, knowledgeable people, eager to help you in your artistic journey.


A special thanks to Sharon Pegram, Co-Assistant Regional Advisor for Southern Breeze, who shared this experience with us last year--and we thought it deserved a re-run! Sharon writes sci-fi and fantasy and yep, you'll see her at SM'19 with her latest manuscript critique!

PLEASE NOTE: MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUES ARE DUE FEBRUARY 8th! Don't delay--Register today!

                   Click HERE to register for SpringMingle'19!

Thursday, July 26, 2018

Show-Mo Success Story!




So… We did it… AGAIN!

June was our second, annual SHOW-MO MONTH!
You came, you showed, you read; we came, we saw, we heard and we responded, and… next year, we’ll do it again! 

We had loads of folks participate in our second annual SHOW-MO. Throughout the month of June, at various places in our region, Local Liaisons*, and other enthusiastic Southern Breeze members*, hosted critique meet-ups so members could show and share up to the first ten pages of their work, and give and receive feedback to help improve their writing in time for the Southern Breeze Writing Contest submission deadline.

SHOW-MO was intended to foster a sense of community amongst our members, encourage submission to our annual Southern Breeze Writing Contest, and help members up-their-game by improving the quality of their pages.

June is over, the SHOW-MOs have concluded, and the contest deadline has come and gone.


Did we accomplish our goals?

YES!


Just look at the pictures and you’ll have to agree the meet-up part was a resounding success. And how could it not be? What’s more fun than hanging out with a bunch of children’s book writers and illustrators as they discuss writing and illustrating children’s books? (The proper response is “Nothing; that’s what.”)

Here’s feedback from this year’s participants and Show-mo hosts:

From Cathy Hall, who hosted a Show-Mo in the Gwinnett County area in Georgia:

We had a terrific turnout for the Show-Mo at the Five Forks Library--we gathered first for a short and informative presentation from author Rebecca Petruck (BOY BITES BUG). And then it was right to work on our manuscripts! We had two groups: a PB group of five and a novel group of six; most of the attendees were Southern Breeze members but we had one young writer (a rising 4th grader) who I hope one day will join SCBWI. :-)

Special thanks to Rebecca Petruck who joined the novel group to give feedback to our middle grade and YA writers, to Lisa Stauffer who jumped in to facilitate the PB group (her PB comes out in August 2018!) and ARA Sharon Pegram who always lends a hand with whatever I need.

From Temika Grooms who hosted a Show-Mo in the Decatur, Georgia area:

The Southern Breeze ShowMo 2018 for Decatur/DeKalb was held on June 2, 2018 at the Kirkwood Library in Atlanta, Georgia.  SCBWI members and non-members gathered for the love of storytelling as they shared and listened to the first 10 pages of each manuscript.  This diverse group provided constructive criticism and support for authors from picture books to middle grade.  Opportunities like these are important for craft development and participants look forward to more critiques in the future.

From Suzanne Purvis, who hosted a Show-Mo in the Florida Panhandle area of our region:

We had a fabulous lunch thanks to Lisa Black who hosted us at her beachfront condo in Destin. We had a blast and  even critiqued too. :-)

From Paula Puckett, who hosted a Show-Mo in the NE Georgia Mountain area:

North Georgia East Write and Draw Event was held in May at the Sautee Nacoochee Center.  Attendees were able to have time to work on individual projects and attend featured displays, such as the miniature quilt display put together by the Mountain Laurel Quilter's Group and the Folk Pottery Museum.

We would like to plan another opportunity to get together in the future at this location.  Please get in touch with Paula Puckett for more information.


*Thank you, thank you, thank you a thousand times over to our SHOW MO volunteers for making this happen. And yes, I’m calling you out: Cathy Hall, Suzanne Purvis, Bobbie Canada, Melissa Miles, Susan Montanari, Carrie Dalby, Martha Hynson, Temika Grooms, Stephanie Moody, MeLeesa Swann, and Paula Puckett. 

If you missed submitting this year, don’t sweat it! We have other events taking place throughout our region (check-out the regional events page here,  https://southern-breeze.scbwi.org/events/ ) and… next June will be here before you know it.

Tootles!   T. K. Read
Critique Group Coordinator, Southern Breeze.



  



Wednesday, May 30, 2018

Breezers in the Neighborhood: JUNE!

Listen up, Breezers! There are only TWO more Show-Mo events left in the Southern Breeze neighborhood, so if you want help with your manuscript, come join us:


When:     Saturday, June 2
               10 AM to 1 PM

Where:    Five Forks Public Library
                Lawrenceville, GA

Contact:  Cathy Hall
                cathyhall55@hotmail.com

(Please note: Cathy's event includes guest speaker Rebecca Petruck, author of BOY BITES BUG, who'll help get the bugs out of your manuscripts!)

Bring at least 4 copies of your PB manuscript; for novel manuscripts, bring 4 copies of the first 10 pages if possible. Contact Cathy if you have any questions. And as always, local liaison events are free and open to the public so bring a friend and share Southern Breeze!


When:   Saturday, June 2
              2 to 5 PM

Where:   Kirkwood Public Library
              11 Kirkwood Rd. NE
              Atlanta, GA  

For more information and to reserve your place RSVP to Temika Grooms: southern-breeze-ic@scbwi.org

Reminder: The Southern Breeze Writing Contest is open to members only. Find out more information at our website.


Oops! There are TWO more Show-Mos that were inadvertently left off the list!

Bobbie Weldon Canada has the following events scheduled:

June 16, 10:00 to 11:30 CMT at the Auburn Public Library, 749 Thach Ave., Auburn, AL

June 23, 10:00 to 11:30 ET, Harris Co. Public Library, 7511 GA Highway 116, Hamilton, GA





The Southern Breeze Gallery featuring original works of our children's book illustrators will continue through June 30th at the Decatur Library, 215 Sycamore Street, Decatur, GA. Please come out and see how talented our illustrators are!


If you have an event around the Southern Breeze neighborhood this summer, please email Cathy Hall with all of your information. We'd love to help get the word out AND the Breezers to your event!

Tuesday, May 1, 2018

Breezers in the Neighborhood: SHOW-MO May!

Show-Mo's starting early this year with events all over our region! Come join Breezers at these free events, and remember, you do not have to be a member of SCBWI Southern Breeze to attend a Show-Mo; we'd love for you to see what SCBWI Southern Breeze is all about! (However, you MUST be a member to participate in the Southern Breeze Writing Contest this June.)

So on with the Show-Mo!





For illustrators in ALL areas of Southern Breeze, Temika Grooms has something special planned. She'll have an online review, 5 to 7PM on Sunday, June 3. Please contact Temika for more details with attn: #ShowMoILL18. (southern-breeze-ic@scbwi.org)


ALABAMA

When:      Saturday, May 19th
                10 AM to Noon

Where:     Earnest & Hadley Booksellers
                 1928 7th Street
                 Tuscaloosa, AL

Contact:    Monique Fields
                 moniquefields@mac.com

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When:      Wednesday, May 23
                 1 to 3 PM

Where:     Hoover Public Library
                 Birmingham, AL

Contact:   Claire Datnow
                 cldatnow@me.com


FLORIDA

When:       Wednesday, May 2

Where:       NW-Florida

Contact:     Suzanne Purvis
                   spurvis500@embarkmail.com


GEORGIA

When:       Saturday, May 5
                  10 AM to 11:30 AM

Where:      Troup-Harris Regional Library
                  115 Alford Street
                  LaGrange, GA

Contact:     Bobbie Weldon Canada

(Please note that this event serves the Alabama/ Opelika area as well as Georgia/Pine Mountain.)
    
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When:       Saturday, May 12
                  10 AM to 12 Noon

Where:      915 Commercial Street
                 Conyers, GA

Contact:   Tk Read
                 tk@tkread.com

(Please note: TK's second event has been cancelled. Check out some of the other Show-Mo events nearby!)

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When:      Saturday, May 19
                 11AM to 1 PM

Where:     Southwest Chatham Library, Children's Activity Room
                 Savannah, GA

Contact:    Melissa Miles
                 melissajmiles1@gmail.com

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When:      Saturday, May 19
                10 AM to 4 PM

Where:     Sautee Nacoochee Center
                 Sautee, GA

Contact:   Paula Puckett
                paulabpuckett@aol.com

(Please note: Paula's event is "Write-In, Draw-In." Please contact her for more details about this fun day for writers AND illustrators!)

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When:     Saturday, June 2
               10 AM to 1 PM

Where:    Five Forks Public Library
                Lawrenceville, GA

Contact:  Cathy Hall
                cathyhall55@hotmail.com

(Please note: Cathy's event includes guest speaker Rebecca Petruck, who'll help get the bugs out of your manuscripts!)

Contact the Local Liaisons listed for more details re: what to bring and how a show-mo works for you. Hope to see you (and your fabulous manuscripts) soon!


Wednesday, January 31, 2018

EVERYONE A WINNER AT WIK'18: Critiques! (More Than Just Your Conference Thrill Ride)

Who doesn’t love a critique? Palms sweating and stomach fluttering with butterflies as you sit down in front of the esteemed editor or agent about to pass judgment on you. Er, I mean your manuscript.

But seriously, a critique from a publishing professional can do so much more for you than feed an adrenaline habit.

My first critique taught me to let my character tell her own story.

My worst critique left me frustrated and angry…and ready to write the story that was in my heart instead of something I thought people would want to read.

At my next critique, the editor wanted to read more of that story.

And, yes, I met my agent at a critique.

WIK18 registration is open, with critique opportunities still available, but manuscripts have to be submitted by February 4. Don’t miss your chance for personalized attention from a publishing professional. Your work will grow, and chances are, you’ll discover that those august sages are nice, knowledgeable people, eager to help you in your artistic journey.


Photo by Debbie Sanders






Sharon Pegram is a Co-Assistant Regional Advisor for Southern Breeze. She writes sci-fi and fantasy and enjoys good thrill rides, both literary and otherwise.








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